Snowy.(Choka)

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This is my first attempt at writing a choka. Had to write because of Jen og blogitorloseit.

http://blogitorloseit.com/2015/01/29/these-days-choka/

I love Eclectic Corner (medium)

http://eclecticoddsnsods.com/2015/01/27/eclectic-corner-5-story-prompt-fictional-writing/

This is no fiction though…or even a proper choka….but it just flowed out.

His Master's Feet. EclecticOddsNSods.

kprof

those marble like eyes

stared at me from behind the fur

so much love in them for me

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 the pink little nose twitched with my scent

the fluffy tail wagged, so full of life

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i loved him too much to see him go

i wait for another life to have him again

i was lucky to have you my child

…………………………………………………………………

you made my life a happy place

i see you in my dreams even today

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but wherever you are in a faraway land

those eyes waiting for me

be sure i will be there some time  

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5 responses »

  1. Thank you so much for entering Eclectic Corner. What a beautiful dog, i was rivetted by the cute pink nose and stunning white fur. The poem was beautiful and tugged at my heart, I just read jens and was recovering LOL, then I read yours and it set me off again. I need to buy more tissues next time I have a doggie writing challenge. You did so well, i can’t believe you havn’t written choka before, sounded good to me 🙂 xxxx big hugs xxx

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  2. Oh, what a sweet looking doggie! I love that cute pink nose!

    This is a wonderful tribute – so much love 🙂

    I am so sorry that Snowy is gone – but yes – someday you’ll be reunited – and he will greet you with tail wags and loving eyes 🙂

    With hugs —
    Jen

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