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the lonely mountain…sijo

Posted on March 28, 2015 by mira65

https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2015/03/28/bjs-shadorma-beyond-sijo-march-28-2015/

it stands alone,as if waiting for someone

the loneliness so difficult, the aloofness unbearable

the unfrequented mountain welcomes the splashing waves

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Jen on March 28, 2015 at 1:06 pm said:

This is exquisite, Mira — I can really see the pauses and breaks in action and it keeps the piece flowing smoothly and beautifully. And the poetic imagery is perfect. Your sijo spoke to me — thank you for writing for this challenge 🙂

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- mira65 on March 28, 2015 at 1:13 pm said:
  
  Thanks Jen:)
  
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  - Jen on March 28, 2015 at 1:17 pm said:
    
    You’re very welcome. 😀
    
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CC Champagne on March 28, 2015 at 6:28 pm said:

This is brilliant! You make the Sijo look so simple, whereas when I tried it… Anyway, I guess I’ll have a go some other time. Loved your poem, in any case!

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- mira65 on March 28, 2015 at 8:42 pm said:
  
  Thanks dear.
  
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C.C. on March 29, 2015 at 4:07 am said:

I like how it is described as alone AND aloof and yet it is still WELCOMING. Beautiful juxtaposition here that is utterly lovely.

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- mira65 on March 29, 2015 at 9:40 am said:
  
  Thanks a ton.
  
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lynn__ on March 30, 2016 at 7:28 am said:

A fabulous poem, Mira, and would also fit our prompt at d’verse Poets if you’d like to share 🙂

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- mira65 on March 30, 2016 at 9:15 am said:
  
  Thanks dear…would look into it…
  
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