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water…haiku

Posted on May 6, 2015 by mira65

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https://haikuhorizons.wordpress.com/2015/05/03/haiku-horizons-prompt-water/

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i cannot hold you

you slip away from my hands

like water

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angelswhisper2011 on May 6, 2015 at 11:34 pm said:

That’s a beautiful haiku 🙂 Pawkisses for a Happy Wednesday 🙂 ❤

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- mira65 on May 6, 2015 at 11:35 pm said:
  
  Thanks dear😊
  
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- mira65 on May 6, 2015 at 11:36 pm said:
  
  And same to u dear!
  
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Prakash Hegade on May 7, 2015 at 12:03 am said:

water, metaphor-ized in an awesome way! too good!

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- mira65 on May 7, 2015 at 12:04 am said:
  
  Thanks dear!
  
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Greg on May 7, 2015 at 12:14 am said:

Such a sweet image.

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Curious to the Max on May 7, 2015 at 12:36 am said:

“you slip from my hands
like water”

That is absolutely WONDERFUL!

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- mira65 on May 7, 2015 at 12:36 am said:
  
  thanks dear!
  
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sarala D on May 7, 2015 at 10:56 pm said:

Nice imagery.

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- mira65 on May 7, 2015 at 10:59 pm said:
  
  thanks!
  
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Archana Kapoor on May 8, 2015 at 11:06 pm said:

that’s a lovely one Mira… do hold him tight 😉
do read mine here: http://drishti.co/2015/05/04/water/

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- mira65 on May 8, 2015 at 11:08 pm said:
  
  read it….they are so lovely…both haiku’s…
  
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  - Archana Kapoor on May 8, 2015 at 11:10 pm said:
    
    thanks for dropping by Mira… hope to see you on Drishti very often 🙂 Cheers
    
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