safe…haiku

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i shall

brave the fierce winds

safe in your arms

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  1. I like your haiku. Here are my impressions. You start out with a really strong “I shall” and then “brave,” which brings to mind a really strong and independent person, braving the fierce winds – alone – and the twist for me is that you (or the person speaking in the poem) end up in someone’s arms, and that’s where (at least in part) your strength comes from, not necessarily from the other person, but together with the other person, that together you are strong and brave … and safe. https://justuscreek.com

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