the raging hormones
the heart beating away madly
long sleepless nights
………………
wish the excitement never faded
wish i was young forever
the raging hormones
the heart beating away madly
long sleepless nights
………………
wish the excitement never faded
wish i was young forever
http://chevrefeuillestankashrine.blogspot.in/2015/02/carpe-diem-tanka-shrine-2.html


as they leave to another land
the departing geese
fluttering their wings
only to return again
heart is where the home is

Sansan to/ sosogu asahi no/fuzukue ni/ nokosu mikan no/ uta zo samishiki
How lonely I would be
left behind on my desk
an unfinished poem
in the glorious morning sun
(Note that the Japanese version is in five lines – but – as she explained to Chèvrefeuille in a separate post– the English version is slightly different. She is translating her poem so as to keep the spirit of the original, more so than the structure of the original.)

Here is mine….
unfinished poetry
like unsatiated hunger
a long night of misery
………
lonely and alone till dawn
the sun bringing hope
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/2015/02/carpe-diem-special-133-fuyuko-tomitas.html